Referring to Spider - Man : Turn Off The Dark as a geartrain wreck is both a tautology and inaccurate . After all , never in human story have two trains — upon crashing — abruptly morphed Voltron - manner into a patchwork homunculus made of isolated bit of ship’s galley and bar car who short begins bellowing , “ THIS search BAD BUT WE CAN MAKE IT shape . ”
luckily for the warbling webslinger , the musical theater is incur some serious revisions , as former writer / director Julie Taymor is rumour to be exiting with the book . But what edits could make this stumble production stand on its own eight legs ?
NOTE : Spoilers ahead .
Snarking on STOTD ’s production imbroglio has now become a national pastime . After a $ 70 million budget , well publicized cast injuries , scathing review seemingly determined to one - up each other in vitriol , a burn reexamination fromGlenn Beck , its own Taiwanese news animation , and Broadway majestrix Julie Taymor getting the pink slip , the show keeps chugging along , accruing a not - show - ending $ 1 million a hebdomad .
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Now the play ’s closing on April 19 for revise ( it ’ll reopen for prevue on May 12 and formally open June 14 ) , and Taymor ’s threateningto abscond with the script , a move that ’s adequate parts boon and disaster for Turn Off The Dark . Nobody wants to rewrite an entire $ 70 million Broadway show in less than month , but Taymor ’s script ( my biggest gripe about the show ) was an incomprehensible slurry of the Spider - Man origin tale and fuzzy fourth bulwark break .
The Spider - Man Broadway melodic is like eating a candy - coated fatal widow
By means of a 75%-of - the - time - nark “ Geek Chorus , ” Taymor is unembarrassed that she ’s secern her version of the Spiderman mythos . mirthful book writers regularly flex and retcon a superhero ’s backstory to fit their tale needs , but Taymor remixes the Spidey narration such that it ’s like watch out the dangerous undertaking of his 1980s Turkish bootleg equivalent , The 8 - Eyed male child And His Nemesis The wild Mr. Guava * . What aspects of Taymor ’s script are in pauperism of drastic revision ?
1 . ) Peter becomes Spider - Man thanks to mystical handling
Taymor ’s biggest overhaul of the Spider - Man pedigree is the improver of the Greek myth of Arachne . Throughout the musical , Arachne ’s arcane influence prods Peter towards becoming a toe - tapping genetic abhorrence — she makes him his costume and impels the mutant spider to twitch him . She ’s weaving his fate from behind the scene , a revelation the tomfool the superhero of any agency . Nerdly Peter Parker does n’t ascertain that with swell power comes great responsibility ; he ’s pressganged into becoming Brundlefly . talk of which …
2 . ) Uncle Ben show up , only to get hit by Flash Thompson ’s steal car
Uncle Ben ’s expiry is the catalyst for Spider - Man becoming favorable and neighborly ( instead of douchey and Hollywood ) . The show spends peradventure 45 second on this headstone consequence — Peter argues with him and Ben die . guess if Vernon Dursley had a fatal diagonal in the first ten page of Harry Potter .
3 . ) The Green Goblin charm the audience , then disappears
Much of the first act is seat on in effect ol’ male child mad scientist Norman Osborn . The tragical translation of Osborn ’s jocular Colonel Sanders - meets - Mr. Wizard into a pilot reptilian - bat is one of the show ’s more weirdly poignant consequence , and move around Off The Dark almost entirely jettisons Norman in the 2d number .
4 . ) likewise , the Sinister Six show up for six seconds
Carnage , the Lizard , Kraven , Swarm , Electro , and Taymor’sninja - asterisk - nippled conception Swiss Missare plastered across ads and promotional materials . They each appear in the second act ’s supervillain fashion show and are then “ shoot down ” when Peter destroy giant projection of them by pantomiming karate . They have no dialogue , no characterization . Do n’t betray us on a Sinister Six and deport a Distasteful Half - Dozen .
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5 . ) Peter oscillate to the period of complete unlikeability
In Act Two , Peter dumps his Spider - Man indistinguishability so he can some more prison term canoodling with Mary Jane . A duo scenes later , ( projections of ) the Sinister Six are extinguish New York City ( and , for some reason , the pyramids in Egypt ) . This is n’t a random mugging Peter ’s ignoring — the hero ’s casting a unreasoning oculus to world warfare for spoon time !
6 . ) The chemistry between Mary Jane and Peter is a foregone determination
moreover , Turn Off The Dark wreak the romance between Mary Jane and Peter as a given . He likes her , she tolerates him , and they ’re the Lockhorns . No marvel Peter ’s zero - gravity dream sex sequence with Arachne smolders . Incidentally …
7 . ) Most of Act Two is a dream !
That was satisfactory for the last season of Roseanne , but I did n’t pay $ 150 to watch the last time of year of Roseanne . Shit , I did n’t even learn the last season of Roseanne .
8 . ) The show is not about J. Jonah Jameson
Along with Patrick Page ’s Green Goblin , Michael Mulheren ’s J. Jonah Jameson is one of the few characters who seem to be having merriment with the production . Rewrite the show as an Odd Couple - panache apartment farce with these two and I ’ll see it every workweek .
9 . ) There ’s no epic final conflict
See points 3 , 4 , and 7 .
10 . ) At the end of the day , the script was less about Spider - Man and more about the built-in bangle of Julie Taymor covering Spider - Man
The play is pepper with in - put-on about how Arachne is Taymor ’s proxy . At one item , Arachne opines she ’s the only true artist ( or something akin to that ) . There ’s a difference between putting your own unique spin on a superhero and sacrificing the fictional character ’s fidelity for a conceitedness project . It ’s not enough to rotely recap the events of Spider - Man ’s bloodline — the show must win over the audience that he ’s an intriguing submarine ( and not just because those Sam Raimi film made the gross domestic product of Greenland ) . The handwriting require to disencumber itself from its own web of self - referential hooey .
- Incidentally , the Turkish Spider - Manis a vicious gangster who murders his victim with gerbils and gravy boat propeller .
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